When you read Les Misérables of Victor Hugo you probably noticed an episode where Fantine sells her beautiful teeth and hair to send money to the family where lived her daughter. Who were buyers?
I really enjoyed this story! But I feel like it ended too soon. I would love to know more examples of what the hair binders did with the hair. And maybe some more details about what those winter nights were like for the valley dwellers. It was a fun story though, and it makes me want to read more from you.
Thank you so much, Michael, for your suggestions. I'm really happy you like the story! And appreciate the view from outside — it's difficult to see the own writing with the eyes of the reader.
I really enjoyed this story! But I feel like it ended too soon. I would love to know more examples of what the hair binders did with the hair. And maybe some more details about what those winter nights were like for the valley dwellers. It was a fun story though, and it makes me want to read more from you.
Thank you so much, Michael, for your suggestions. I'm really happy you like the story! And appreciate the view from outside — it's difficult to see the own writing with the eyes of the reader.